Can you rewrite the following sentence in a much easier way? Lisa told Emma that she had been impre
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« on: January 03, 2024, 08:47:30 PM »
Can you rewrite the following sentence in a much easier way? 

Lisa told Emma that she had been impressed by her positive attitude and determination during their brief encounter.
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« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2024, 01:24:59 AM »
Yes, I can.
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« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2024, 12:37:55 PM »
I think "Lisa told Emma she was impressed by her positive attitude and determination when they briefly met." captures the meaning you're trying to convey in a more direct, less wordy construction.
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