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Southern Senator North Carolina Yankee
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« on: May 12, 2018, 02:19:30 AM »

This has to be brought into compliance with the Amendment Explanation requirements.
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« Reply #1 on: May 14, 2018, 03:47:49 AM »

This has to be brought into compliance with the Amendment Explanation requirements.

Also we should indicate better changes relative to the current text of the constitution.
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« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2018, 04:19:49 AM »

CHANGES!:

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Article IV, Section 2.1 of the Constitution shall be amended to read the following:

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People's Regional Senate:
Passed 4-0-1 in the Atlasian Senate assembled


Sponsor: dfwlibertylover

I will wait to hear from the sponsor, but I see myself supporting this.

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     Should I understand this to mean that you will officially propose this as an amendment if the sponsor responds positively?
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I think you can change that aspect without amendment, under the grounds of grammar and formatting.

The Explanation part on the other hand will require an amendment.
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« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2018, 11:00:37 PM »

lol This is going to be fun. Tongue
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« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2018, 11:38:35 PM »
« Edited: May 26, 2018, 12:03:48 AM by People's Speaker North Carolina Yankee »

I would note that utilizing the top line mission statement for the purposes of amendment explanation differs from the standards applied in the other amendments, including Dual Officeholding by this chamber. I would also note that the statute and rules establishing this process differentiated between the two elements of the format.

Something like this is more in line with those formats:

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Article IV, Section 2.1 of the Constitution shall be amended to read the following:

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People's Regional Senate:
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« Reply #5 on: May 25, 2018, 11:42:10 PM »

I also would advise the review of the texts for potential spelling problems. I correct one in the original text already. "Appropriate" towards the end of the text is incorrectly spelled in the underlying text.
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« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2018, 12:04:14 AM »

For the sake of time I officially offer my above text as an amendment.
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« Reply #7 on: May 28, 2018, 11:06:34 AM »

Once again I recommend review for any lingering errors of spelling and so forth that I missed in the underlying bill when composing my amendment.
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« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2018, 04:07:23 AM »

AYE


Wow, not what I was expecting to happen on the vote.
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« Reply #9 on: June 05, 2018, 02:02:17 AM »

Just one question, could this be reintroduced? 

Yes
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« Reply #10 on: July 06, 2018, 11:09:55 AM »

You will get another chance very soon. Tongue
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