What's the range on the current proposal?
Current proposal is -36 to +63. Your proposed map would have less of a population range but it is clearly not close to being compact.
True. (Changing the boundary between the 4th and 1st to be nice wouldn't change partisanship, but I couldn't get the populations to add up without having the tail.) It does, however, have the feature that the largest 15 cities in Iowa would remain in their current district (ignoring some parts in Dallas County that get split off).
I don't expect this to be the map, I'm just playing around.