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Nowadays, more and more students become short-sighted. It’s really a serious problem. Many students have too much homework to do every day. As a result, they hardly have time to rest their eyes. I think they should have a rest every hour and have a look at the green trees. Some students have bad reading habits. They usually read on the bed or on the bus. I think they should read in a bright place and sit in a right way. Some students have computers and mobile phones. They spend too much time on them. I think too much screen(屏幕) time really hurts their eyes.
So, eyes are the windows of our soul, we should learn to take care of our eyes
注意点：人称一定要一致。他们they。不能一会儿写we，一会儿写they
Some students eat too much food every day, including meat and desserts. I think parents should care about their eating habit. They should eat more fruits and vegetables. Some students hardly do sports. I think they should exercise every day. Sports make them strong and fit(苗条). Many students have too much homework every day, and they sit for too long. I think teachers and parents should give them less homework and more free time to do sports. After all, a good body always comes first.
