Well, once again, I think it's worth mentioning that the law we have in place is far more forgiving than the Consitutional provisions themselves. An expelled Senator cannot hold high office again---ever, as per the Constitution.
So I think the AG's revisions are fine, but point out they're much harsher for missing legislators than what's currently in place.
Naturally, I don't draft legislation that I think is unconstitutional, but I'm not attached to preserving it if favor of the AG's efficient wording.
I agree the GM is a dubious position to subject to government doings, but I think it's appropriate for the government to have a voice in checking the occupant of the role who represents the federal bureacracy, and whose absence would be as detrimental as any of the others.
Actually, only impeachment bars a person from further office. Being expelled from the Senate, dismissed from the cabinet or the Supreme Court, or being declared unable to serve do not bar a person from furher office. Only Section 3 of my proposed bill mentions impeachment, and even then it doesn't mandate it as the government could choose to limp along with an Acting President until the next regular election. Strictly speaking, impeachment would only be necessary in the event that both the President and the Vice-President fell silent as there is no constitutional method for having an Acting President other than the Vice-President. Basically the propsed replacement provides guidance as to when the existing Constitutional provisions for removing from office should be activated when officials aren't present. With the exception of cabinet officials who don't get their absence excused by the President, there is no automatic removal under this legislations for anyone.