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Psychic Octopus
Junior Chimp
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« on: February 29, 2012, 10:35:23 PM »

Great work, and I like your style of writing. It's combative, but not overly so, and engages the reader. However, I have a few quibbles. For one, when you use "it's," as in "it's ratings" or "it's fight," it should be "its ratings" or "its fight." "It's" is a contraction for "it is" or "it has." And, I think the breaking up into subcategories detract from the overall article. Otherwise, great work.
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