Okay, that is fine Governor. While Tmth writes that up we can move on to Filinovich.
Show us what you got.
The final product for the Bill of Rights might take a while. We are looking at adding 20 - 30 additional rights.
Given the magnitude of the number of additions and controversial aspects of some of them (Right to revolution, to bear arms, "marriage") I would advise that this article is handled differently than the other ones. Perhaps a committee of the whole would be best so we can all iron out changes together on a single document rather than going back and forth in a thread. I'm not sure.
I've already reworded the article in response to the Name Change Referenda and have reworded some of sections. The most recent edit is as follows.
Please forgive any errors in copying the article to the forum and clearly distinguishing additions and deletions. It was copied from Google Docs, to allow for ease of editing between myself and Mr. Reactionary, which uses a different system of formatting.Most changes are purely grammar-focused.
I think it should be considered whether the demonym of the region should be "Jeffersonian" or if there's a better alternative, given that it is used throughout this article.
Another thing is that the sixth section is very poorly written and doesn't explicitly specify that religion can't be used as an excuse for breaking laws that one believes violates ones own religion. I would personally recommend something along the lines of the Florida Constitution's Article I Section 3
I would also recommend the addition of a section listed at the end of the article similar to the Ninth Amendment to the US Constitution.
Article IX of the Southern Constitution seems well-worded. The name change will need to be applied to this article.
I would also like to open debate on whether Jeffersonian ratification of an amendment to the Constitution of Atlasia should require a majority of all citizens rather than just a majority of those voting. I'll have a draft of the article ready by this time tomorrow.