Part I: Los Angeles and the Aftermath
“We’re getting some extremely disturbing news here...Senator Kennedy has reportedly been shot at the Ambassador Hot--I’m sorry, the Senator is apparently unharmed, and the assailant has been pacified. Senator Kennedy has been shot AT, but he has not been wounded, thank God.”
Chapter 2: It's Time for Bobby!
"We’re getting some extremely disturbing news here...Senator Robert F. Kennedy of New York has reportedly been shot at the Ambassador Hot-I’m sorry, the Senator is apparently unharmed, and the assailant has been pacified. Senator Kennedy has been shot AT, but he has not been wounded, thank God."
- CBS News Anchor
One of these things is not exactly like the other
I have listened to the report of Kennedy dying and adjusted accordingly and the image is of course the best I could find but any correlation between my TL and yours is completely by coincidence. Is there a chance that stuff like this can overlap? Yes, but I didn't read your TL (considering my hatred for the Kennedies IRL) so it's by coincidence.
Anyways, thoughts on the TL?
I mean, I'm sorry, but this is exactly the same text. It can't be a coincidence, especially considering the fact that I do recall your using parts of UWS's TL in the past. Frankly, this is intellectual dishonesty, it would've been better to just admit it (still not really good though, plagiarism is bad).