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« on: July 09, 2022, 07:59:07 PM »
I somehow read this as Harry Potter
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« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2022, 10:12:45 PM »
Quote from: LeonelBrizola on July 09, 2022, 10:00:39 PM

Understandable. Are you liking the timeline?
It’s good but could be a bit better. Like, somehow a slightly more exciting tone?
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« Reply #2 on: July 10, 2022, 12:13:20 AM »
Quote from: LeonelBrizola on July 09, 2022, 10:50:48 PM
Quote from: Utah Neolib on July 09, 2022, 10:12:45 PM
Quote from: LeonelBrizola on July 09, 2022, 10:00:39 PM

Understandable. Are you liking the timeline?
It’s good but could be a bit better. Like, somehow a slightly more exciting tone?
Define "exciting". Do you mean to get a greater dopamine rush on readers?
Something like that. I’m not trying to criticize, I’m trying to give advice. It needs slightly more basis in reality and more of a “hook” for readers.
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