I think the bill is fine as is, the "stores and supermarkets" exception just clarifies the bill. I wouldn't mind returning to the original wording though, but removing 1.e might be an issue, as some stadiums might be considered public arenas? And thus lead to stungun fights in those stadiums?
I also support Reactionary's idea of adding an ammendment to the Being Safe in Public Act to allow bussinesses to ban stunguns if they desire through appropiate signage.
If everyone's ok with it, I propose the following ammendment instead, which returns the bill to the original wording and adds Reactionary's compromise option. It still keeps point 1.e albeit as a part of the ammendment to the Being Safe in Public Act instead of on the bill proper:
2. 3. This act shall take effect immediately. No lawsuit to enforce the provisions of the law shall be justiciable in any federal or Regional court until 90 days after this law takes effect.[/quote]
Sidenote: I guess we now have an ammendment to ammend a bill inside a bill that was previously ammended as well. Ammendment-ception