Unconditional Surrender Truman
Harry S Truman
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« on: December 02, 2017, 08:07:01 PM » |
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Might I suggest, politely, that the language of the proposed amendment be cleaned up a bit? In the present text, there are at least two titles ("Lincoln Election Administrator" and "Lincoln Election Administration") for what is presumably the same office, others ("Lutenient Governor") are mispelled, and words like "somebody" are a little too vague and universal to be included in a governing charter (I'd recommend "acting officer").
I'd be happy to help redraft the amendment if desired, though of course I understand if the speaker would prefer to do so himself.
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